I haven't posted a teaser in "forever". This is the opening of the new manuscript I turned in a month ago to my editor.
Current title: Circle of Secrets
Most folks call Miz Mirage Allemond a swamp witch.
Current title: Circle of Secrets
Most folks call Miz Mirage Allemond a swamp witch.
I’m supposed to call her Mamma.
So when Mirage cracks open the front door and I see her wild black hair writhing in the wind like serpents, my pulse goes so fast I can’t breathe right.
Mirage’s black eyes bore into mine like she can read my deepest thoughts. Like she has a crystal ball and uses it regularly.
As she shuts the front door, we stare at each other for a moment, but I drop my eyes before she can suck my soul out.
4 comments:
I love the first two lines! I'm hooked already. HOOKED.
Gawsh, thanks so much, Elana! You made my day. ;-)
Yeah, I like it alot. Seeing Mirage's hair writhing around like snakes is pretty cool too, I must say. :D
Thank you so much, RaShelle!!!
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